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  1. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Coming of Age

    With society stuck in the past, a transgender girl struggles to cope with the reinstated bathroom ban.

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    Added an answer on October 11, 2017 at 12:35 am

    Laughingfire: Who is the target audience for this short? Is it preaching to the choir, to the LGBT audience who are most inclined to identify and sympathize with the predicament portrayed?? Or do you wish to reach a broader audience; do you seek to engage the understanding and sympathy of the dominaRead more

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    Who is the target audience for this short? Is it preaching to the choir, to the LGBT audience who are most inclined to identify and sympathize with the predicament portrayed?? Or do you wish to reach a broader audience; do you seek to engage the understanding and sympathy of the dominant straights?? What is your artistic objective goal in making this?

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  2. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Comedy

    After her fathers death a trash-talking Brooklynite takes her family?s obsolete private detective agency into the modern age with the power of a smartphone. (Episodic Series)

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2017 at 9:58 pm

    How does "taking the PI business in a fresh direction" play out in terms of a specific objective goal?? What is the inciting incident in the pilot episode that triggers her to pursue that goal?

    How does “taking the PI business in a fresh direction” play out in terms of a specific objective goal?? What is the inciting incident in the pilot episode that triggers her to pursue that goal?

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Crime

    A teenager released from juvie sets his mind on clean living, only to find that his rural towns factory has outsourced and the local kingpin has taken over turning all the desperate townsfolk into criminals. (Episodic Series)

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2017 at 9:54 pm

    Loglines are about what characters do, not about lessons they learn.? So in your pilot episode, what is the immediate inciting incident and what does your main character do about it?? What becomes her or his objective goal?A gold standard model for structuring the pilot plot of a series is "BreakingRead more

    Loglines are about what characters do, not about lessons they learn.? So in your pilot episode, what is the immediate inciting incident and what does your main character do about it?? What becomes her or his objective goal?

    A gold standard model for structuring the pilot plot of a series is “Breaking Away”.? A logline for the? episode launching the series might be written as:? “When a milquetoast high school chemistry teacher? is diagnosed with incurable cancer (inciting incident), he starts manufacturing meth to earn enough money to provide for his family after he’s dead (objective goal).”

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