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With society stuck in the past, a transgender girl struggles to cope with the reinstated bathroom ban.
The concept is certainly topical.? If the agenda is? to create "awareness", the best way to do that is through the vehicle of a well-designed plot.? Which means that "struggling to cope" needs to be fleshed out in terms of a specific objective goal in the context of the protagonist's specific situatRead more
The concept is certainly topical.? If the agenda is? to create “awareness”, the best way to do that is through the vehicle of a well-designed plot.? Which means that “struggling to cope” needs to be fleshed out in terms of a specific objective goal in the context of the protagonist’s specific situation.? So provoked by the reinstatement of bathroom ban, what becomes the protagonist’s game plan?
See lessAn engineer of peace have to lead war against the machines when the established, human safe heaven on mars gets threatened by the past.
Foxtrot25's version is an interesting one.? But because of the wording, some of it grammatical, I'm not sure his version incorporates the story you want to tell.What's the difference between an "engineer of peace" and a peace activist?? And how does a war against machines correlate with a threat froRead more
Foxtrot25’s version is an interesting one.? But because of the wording, some of it grammatical, I’m not sure his version incorporates the story you want to tell.
What’s the difference between an “engineer of peace” and a peace activist?? And how does a war against machines correlate with a threat from the past?? What’s is the conflict really about?? What?is really at stake here?
See lessA lovesick student turns down his dream-intership to travel to Hong Kong to meet his holiday romance, but after he loses his phone he has to figure out other ways of finding her within 12 hours before he flies back again. (Note: it’s a short film concept)
Well, I guess for a short it might play.? But, really, what's the urgency, what are the stakes? What's the worry?? So he doesn't find her in 12 hours, has to leave?? What's the loss?? Can't he always get another cell phone, get in contact, try again?On the other foot, if he has 12 hours to find herRead more
Well, I guess for a short it might play.? But, really, what’s the urgency, what are the stakes? What’s the worry?? So he doesn’t find her in 12 hours, has to leave?? What’s the loss?? Can’t he always get another cell phone, get in contact, try again?
On the other foot, if he has 12 hours to find her and talk her out of marrying the wrong guy…
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