The inciting incident seems rather small? to justify the magnitude of the effort and risk he undertakes. Even for a comedy where characters have license to make big mistakes for stupid reasons.? He puts himself and multiple universes at risk of total annihilation just because he has some doubts.??

Doubts?

Also the logline seems to provide a contrived too convenient piece of awesome magic: he finds a way to jump through dimensions. Wow, just like that he is able to pull that rabbit out of the hat? Why is he able to perform that trick, a trick no one else can?

Then when he gets there he risk collapsing the multiverse. Another piece of magic,? dark (matter?) magic,? but magic, nonetheless.

I think the premise requires a lot of magic, perhaps too much magic, all of which has to be explained before anyone can really understand what the story is about.

And why does he feel he must look in another universe for “the one” when there are 4 billion other candidates? on this planet in this one?

And as Foxtrot25 asked:? where’s the funny?? It’s billed as a comedy.