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A dracula who hates killing people for blood finds a companionship in a coward son of a gangster.
I like the conflicted character but now the logline needs a conflict based on some necessary action created by an inciting incident. ?What is the inciting incident that throws the 2 together? ?As a result ?of that inciting incident, what becomes his objective goal? ?Who opposes him?
I like the conflicted character but now the logline needs a conflict based on some necessary action created by an inciting incident. ?What is the inciting incident that throws the 2 together? ?As a result ?of that inciting incident, what becomes his objective goal? ?Who opposes him?
See lessTo save his family, a former criminal profiler, with a supernatural ability that allows him to enter people?s minds, is pressured to work for the drug cartel.
First of all, it's more effective for a logline to frame the conflict in terms of a singular protagonist vs. singular antagonist. ?In this case he's (probably) going up against the leader of the drug cartel.Now, then: ?he has a supernatural ability to read the mess in the minds of criminals -- but iRead more
First of all, it’s more effective for a logline to frame the conflict in terms of a singular protagonist vs. singular antagonist. ?In this case he’s (probably) going up against the leader of the drug cartel.
Now, then: ?he has a supernatural ability to read the mess in the minds of criminals — but it’s not good enough to mess with and, hence, outwit the minds of the criminal leader of a drug cartel or any of his subordinates. (???) ?What supernatural ability does the leader have that gives him the upper hand?
See lessA brilliant young woman-of-science disguises herself as a (male) witch-finder’s assistant so she can undermine the brutal practice of witch burning in spite of a greedy witch-finder who will not pardon any of the town?s witches. A musical comedy
Rather than "Woman of science", just say "A female scientist".And where and when is this set?>>>" who will not pardon any of the town?s witches"In other word's, he's merciless.The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather thaRead more
Rather than “Woman of science”, just say “A female scientist”.
And where and when is this set?
>>>” who will not pardon any of the town?s witches”
In other word’s, he’s merciless.
The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather than as a conflict between a woman and the practice of witch burning — and, oh, by the way, the prime instigator of the witch burning is a witch hunter. ?Establish a direct protagonist vs. antagonist relationship.
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