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An anomaly opens a portal which brings three people from different time periods under one roof to deal with the alien race that monitors the universe for inferior race development.
>>>to deal with the alien race >>>to correct the problem Vague. ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal for the protagonist? ?And who in this menagerie of characters is the protagonist, anyway? ?A logline should be built around the protagonist, ?not the supporting cRead more
>>>to deal with the alien race
>>>to correct the problem
Vague. ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal for the protagonist? ?And who in this menagerie of characters is the protagonist, anyway? ?A logline should be built around the protagonist, ?not the supporting characters. ?Anyone reading the logline should immediately know who the protagonist is, who is in the driver’s seat of the story.
See lessfamous voodoo queen reincarnated with no recollection of who or what she is capable of. Her past lives assist her in discovering her true identity.
As Nir Shelter said. And what dramatic difference does it make if she discovers her past/true identity? Why MUST she know this? ?What dramatic problem MUST she solve with this knowledge?
As Nir Shelter said.
And what dramatic difference does it make if she discovers her past/true identity? Why MUST she know this? ?What dramatic problem MUST she solve with this knowledge?
See lessIn order to save his mother, a young man embarks in an adventure to get proof of a friendly monster’s existence.
Well, then, maybe ?something like: To pay for an operation that will save his sick mother's life, a poor boy enters a contest to prove the existence of a legendary magical monster. ?(27 words)
Well, then, maybe ?something like:
To pay for an operation that will save his sick mother’s life, a poor boy enters a contest to prove the existence of a legendary magical monster. ?(27 words)
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