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After mystical criminals break a powerful witch out of prison, a wizard a part of a magic police force must lead her first mission to catch them.
My first gut(less) reaction: ?I can't (yet) get excited by (aka: hooked on) the plot.But a female wizard ?bringing mystically bad guys to justice -- that appeals, that hooks my interest. ?Do you see franchise potential in your character? ?(If so, the plot would have to be her origin story.) ?Or do eRead more
My first gut(less) reaction: ?I can’t (yet) get excited by (aka: hooked on) the plot.
But a female wizard ?bringing mystically bad guys to justice — that appeals, that hooks my interest. ?Do you see franchise potential in your character? ?(If so, the plot would have to be her origin story.) ?Or do envision this as a one-off?
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See lessA drop-dead gorgeous mute is bartered into a harem where beauty is a death sentence and she must find her voice to survive.
>>>> where self-expression prompts life-saving action. Which action is....? What is her objective goal given her circumstances? ? How does "self-expression" translate into a specific action plan to rescue herself (if no one else will ) from her predicament?
>>>> where self-expression prompts life-saving action.
Which action is….?
What is her objective goal given her circumstances? ? How does “self-expression” translate into a specific action plan to rescue herself (if no one else will ) from her predicament?
See lessA drop-dead gorgeous mute is bartered into a harem where beauty is a death sentence and she must find her voice to survive.
It strains my credulity that being beautiful is a liability in a harem. ?That was the point of bartering for her, wasn't it?
It strains my credulity that being beautiful is a liability in a harem. ?That was the point of bartering for her, wasn’t it?
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