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Reword #2: When she is abducted by her estranged father so she can be spared, a stubborn humanitarian must find a way to prevent him from killing most of humanity.
Agree with Richiev. ?The story needs to specify the method; it's not an incidental detail.
Agree with Richiev. ?The story needs to specify the method; it’s not an incidental detail.
See lessWhen a desperate Wisconsin farm wife invites WWII Nazi POWs to work the family orchard, she brings the war home.
What the others have said about properly formulating a logline.There is certainly rich potential for an original story as there were ?camps for German POW's in the United States during World War II and the prisoners were allowed to work in the community, to relieve the shortage of manpower.Also theRead more
What the others have said about properly formulating a logline.
There is certainly rich potential for an original story as there were ?camps for German POW’s in the United States during World War II and the prisoners were allowed to work in the community, to relieve the shortage of manpower.
Also the story takes place in Wisconsin, a state with a large number of residents descended from German ?immigrants. ?So this story could be not just a clash of cultures but also of generations.
More immigrants to the United States came from Germany than from any other country in Europe. ?But you wouldn’t know it based on the pleothra of films made about other immigrant groups, ?the paucity of films about the German immigrant experience. ? I wish you the best with your story idea.
See lessImprisoned in an apartment with a complete stranger, an idealist twenty-something has to find a way to save herself and the world population from the secret organization holding her captive.
>>>And also, she?s an idealist and wants to make a better world which means that, even though she might not understand it at first, starting over could be doing just that. So what's her character arc? ?The focus of ?a logline ?is the through line of the action toward an object goal (which,Read more
>>>And also, she?s an idealist and wants to make a better world which means that, even though she might not understand it at first, starting over could be doing just that.
So what’s her character arc? ?The focus of ?a logline ?is the through line of the action toward an object goal (which, in her case is?), but in delineating a through line it should suggest a character arc that the protagonist undergoes along the way.
By the end of the story how we will she differ from what she was at the start?
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