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  1. Posted: June 9, 2017In: Thriller

    A detective struggles to solve his partner’s murder, stumbles upon other murders and indication it might have been an inside job carried out by dirty cops who are now hunting him.

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2017 at 7:30 am

    Yeah, what's the hook? ?What makes this different, ?makes it stand out from the very crowded field of crime genre shows and movies?

    Yeah, what’s the hook? ?What makes this different, ?makes it stand out from the very crowded field of crime genre shows and movies?

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  2. Posted: June 7, 2017In: Coming of Age

    While the country is being swept by an epidemic where the people are gradually fading away from existence, a struggling poet tries to compose an ode to his amnesic father, but must deal with his overbearing mother who is hell bent on sending him abroad to escape from this fate.

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2017 at 3:24 am

    Like Nir Shelter, I can't figure out what the story is really about.The story hook is people gradually fading away because of an epidemic. ?I don't see how writing poetry builds on that story hook or is in any way as interesting. ? Why does it matter whether someone finishes a poem when there are biRead more

    Like Nir Shelter, I can’t figure out what the story is really about.

    The story hook is people gradually fading away because of an epidemic. ?I don’t see how writing poetry builds on that story hook or is in any way as interesting. ? Why does it matter whether someone finishes a poem when there are bigger problems to worry about, like humanity ?dying off?

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  3. Posted: May 30, 2017In: Examples

    When a disillusioned hacker discovers that the world he accepts as real is a virtual simulation, he struggles to develop the power to liberate humanity from its enslavement to computers.

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    Added an answer on June 5, 2017 at 12:48 am

    And alternative version incorporating ?the prophesy:When a disillusioned hacker discovers the world is a virtual simulation, he must struggle to fulfill the prophesy to ?become the one who liberates humanity from its enslavement to computers.(30 words)The shocking discovery is the inciting incidentRead more

    And alternative version incorporating ?the prophesy:

    When a disillusioned hacker discovers the world is a virtual simulation, he must struggle to fulfill the prophesy to ?become the one who liberates humanity from its enslavement to computers.

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    The shocking discovery is the inciting incident even though it ?occurs a half hour into the film and is the transition/threshold event from Act 1 to Act 2.

    Fulfilling the prophesy is the expectation placed upon him by Morpheus. ?Is Neo “The ?One”? ?That’s the dramatic question Neo and the film must answer.

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