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When a young girl with special brain abilities finally escapes her prison, she?s seen as a weapon of mass destruction by both sides of a rebellion ? but she?s just searching for peace.
Agree with Dkpough1. ? "Searching for peace" needs to be translated into a specific, visual, objective goal. ?While others are pursuing her, she needs to be pursuing something tangible, something concrete.The plot should be framed in terms of what she is running towards, not merely from whom she isRead more
Agree with Dkpough1. ? “Searching for peace” needs to be translated into a specific, visual, objective goal. ?While others are pursuing her, she needs to be pursuing something tangible, something concrete.
The plot should be framed in terms of what she is running towards, not merely from whom she is running from.
See lessAfter his son is shot in a drive-by, a gangster must use his crippled werewolf abilities to kill the vengeful vampire who has been attacking his gang.
If your swinging for the fences with this premise, ?writing an origin story for a franchise, then I suggest the protagonist be the victim's younger brother rather than his father. ?That way, the saga will have greater appeal to the sweet spot in the demographics necessary to built and sustain a franRead more
If your swinging for the fences with this premise, ?writing an origin story for a franchise, then I suggest the protagonist be the victim’s younger brother rather than his father. ?That way, the saga will have greater appeal to the sweet spot in the demographics necessary to built and sustain a franchise, the teen and young adult audience.
And consequently the protagonist’s character arc would be to develop his nascent (rather than crippled) powers. ?He’s got to build and learn how to flex his inner muscles. ?Yeah, like a certain young Jedi in a galaxy far, far away — the standard, Hero’s Journey. ?Tried and true — and lucrative — when it works.
Finally, have you thought about switching gender roles, making the protagonist a she, the antagonist a he? ?With the successful resurrection of the Wonder Woman character, I would guess Hollyweird ?is looking for other franchise-friendly female action characters.
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See lessA teenage Jewish boy in a Nazi death camp sets out to keep the promise of love with Hitler’s daughter despite the horrid Nazism they face.
What's the backstory on Hitler's daughter. ?Who is the mother? ?When/how did the affair happen? As Nir Shelter indicated, the concept requires a considerable suspension of disbelief because there is no record of Hitler having any children. ?You cannot cram the backstory into the logline, but that'sRead more
What’s the backstory on Hitler’s daughter. ?Who is the mother? ?When/how did the affair happen?
As Nir Shelter indicated, the concept requires a considerable suspension of disbelief because there is no record of Hitler having any children. ?You cannot cram the backstory into the logline, but that’s the 1st thing that any credible movie maker will want to know. ?What, Hitler had a daughter? ?When? ?By whom? ?Your script has to get over that hurdle before it is going to get serious attention.
Also, stretching credibility is the fact that one of the better kept secrets of the Nazi era was that Hitler had a mistress, Eva Braun. ? The existence of their affair was only known to a few in Hitler’s inner circle. ?A very few: the general public — that includes 99.99% of the military and SS, never knew about her–until the final months of the war when she joined him at his bunker in Berlin.
And?the two love birds were never shown together in public. Fr?ulein Braun never tagged along with him in his victory tours. ?Yet your story not gives Hitler an illegitimate daughter — ?scandalous! — but also has her tagging along with vater Adolf, ?Der F?hrer, when he tours the Ost front.
What’s her backstory?
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