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When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
The industry standard formulation for a logline (see ?"Formula" at the top of the web page) is that an inciting incident triggers a protagonist to pursue an objective goal.So what's ?is ?the ultimate objective goal in this situation? ? Isn't it to solve the crime? ?I can see the comedy potential ofRead more
The industry standard formulation for a logline (see ?”Formula” at the top of the web page) is that an inciting incident triggers a protagonist to pursue an objective goal.
So what’s ?is ?the ultimate objective goal in this situation? ? Isn’t it to solve the crime? ?I can see the comedy potential of the clash of temperaments — but that clash is a complication to his objective goal. ?It isn’t the inciting incident that precipitates his objective goal. ?The inciting incident is the murder. ?The objective goal that arises from that is he must solve the crime. ?The clashing temperaments is a complication.
See lessA dark, sinister agent tears apart once inseparable brothers into fierce, hateful rivals as he plots to destroy the protagonist and his family for opposing his rule as a demi-god on ancient Earth.
Once again, the logline makes the mistake of defining a plot in terms of the antagonist. ?A plot in a logline ?should be defined in terms of the protagonist.(And the tag "protagonist" should not be used in a logline.)
Once again, the logline makes the mistake of defining a plot in terms of the antagonist. ?A plot in a logline ?should be defined in terms of the protagonist.
(And the tag “protagonist” should not be used in a logline.)
See lessIn the dark days following World War II, two enterprising brothers are torn apart by dark, sinister forces and made bitter enemies as they emerge from the wreckage of their PBM in the Bermuda Triangle.
What is a PBM? And what exactly are the dark sinister forces that makes the brothers bitter enemies? And what becomes their objective goal as a result? ? What's the plot? ?It's not enough to set up a dramatic situation; a logline must also lay out a plot the follows as a result of the dramatic situaRead more
What is a PBM?
And what exactly are the dark sinister forces that makes the brothers bitter enemies?
And what becomes their objective goal as a result? ? What’s the plot? ?It’s not enough to set up a dramatic situation; a logline must also lay out a plot the follows as a result of the dramatic situation.
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