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  1. Posted: April 26, 2017In: SciFi

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 26, 2017 at 11:06 pm

    As Nir Shelter said. Also what is this logline for? ?A feature film as the origin story for a franchise, a long form VOD streaming series? ?Or...? And I can't help but notice some similarities between this concept and elements from the the "Final Fantasy" video game series. ?The video game has a chaRead more

    As Nir Shelter said.

    Also what is this logline for? ?A feature film as the origin story for a franchise, a long form VOD streaming series? ?Or…?

    And I can’t help but notice some similarities between this concept and elements from the the “Final Fantasy” video game series. ?The video game has a character by the name of Atlas Crow and it also has a Guardian Corp, which raises a concern about copyright and trademark infringement.

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  2. Posted: April 26, 2017In: Thriller

    What about

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    Added an answer on April 26, 2017 at 1:51 pm

    The telemarketer needs to have a personal problem or flaw that relates to the dramatic situation created by the suicidal caller. ?How about having her on the verge of committing suicide, too? ?She's working ?a lousy, dead end job, feels trapped in a dead end life, is planning to kill herself after hRead more

    The telemarketer needs to have a personal problem or flaw that relates to the dramatic situation created by the suicidal caller. ?How about having her on the verge of committing suicide, too? ?She’s working ?a lousy, dead end job, feels trapped in a dead end life, is planning to kill herself after her shift ends.

    And then she gets the call.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: April 26, 2017In: Thriller

    A soldier returns home with a Bronze Star, a Purple Heart, and a desire to become a professional high stakes poker player, believing it is a safer lifestyle. So she thought.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 26, 2017 at 1:32 pm

    As KW ?and Richiev said. ? The logline needs to spell out a specific dramatic problem, a specific threat -- not a vague hint of one. ?As it is, while there's almost too much information (for a logline) about the character there's not enough information what the the plot. ?We know who the story is abRead more

    As KW ?and Richiev said. ?

    The logline needs to spell out a specific dramatic problem, a specific threat — not a vague hint of one. ?As it is, while there’s almost too much information (for a logline) about the character there’s not enough information what the the plot. ?We know who the story is about but not what the story is about.

    The logline needs to provide a specific inciting incident that creates a specific dramatic problem that compels the character to commit to a specific objective goal in order to solve the problem.

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