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  1. Posted: April 27, 2017In: Family

    In a quaint country bay, a leaky dinghy and a fearful speedboat must help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 1:27 am

    What Richiev said. ?I don't see why it's such a big problem. ?If the "spoilt tender" (what does that mean?) misses the departure, can't she always catch up at the next port? And if she can't, so what? ?Won't there ?be other opportunities for her to travel the world?

    What Richiev said. ?I don’t see why it’s such a big problem. ?If the “spoilt tender” (what does that mean?) misses the departure, can’t she always catch up at the next port?

    And if she can’t, so what? ?Won’t there ?be other opportunities for her to travel the world?

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  2. Posted: April 27, 2017In: Thriller

    After uncovering a false flag terror plot, a na?ve but ambitious reporter risks her life and the lives of her colleagues to unmask the conspirators before they topple the US government for the story of a lifetime.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 1:24 am

    No doubt, a terrorist group could do a lot of mischief and damage, but it's hard to conceive that they could unilaterally bring down the US government. What's their secret, their unique weapon or a m.o. of attack that no other terrorist group has that would enable them to succeed? That there's a conRead more

    No doubt, a terrorist group could do a lot of mischief and damage, but it’s hard to conceive that they could unilaterally bring down the US government.

    What’s their secret, their unique weapon or a m.o. of attack that no other terrorist group has that would enable them to succeed?

    That there’s a conspiracy against the US government is not a story hook — there are plenty of movies about such conspiracies. Nor is the there a hook in that it’s up to one intrepid individual to save the government and the world — no lack of movies with that kind of hero’s job, either. (Nor that the character is a reporter — no lack of movies about reporters exposing and stopping plots.)

    The hook for this story is the secret sauce the terrorists possess, the unique threat they pose to the US government. ?Whatever that is, it needs to be in the logline to distinguish it from all the other loglines about a plot to take down governments unless one intrepid guy or gal stops it.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: April 27, 2017In: Drama

    A Ethical Hacker and his reconciled mother, attempt to muckraking the person behind hackings of his employer

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    Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 1:11 am

    What threat does the hacking pose to the employer (and the white hat hacker) that he must expose the black hat hacker? Yes, the hacking is a security breach. ?Yes, the hacking is embarrassing. ?But beyond that, what specific threat to the employer does it pose that compels the good guy to "muckrake"Read more

    What threat does the hacking pose to the employer (and the white hat hacker) that he must expose the black hat hacker?

    Yes, the hacking is a security breach. ?Yes, the hacking is embarrassing. ?But beyond that, what specific threat to the employer does it pose that compels the good guy to “muckrake” the perpetrator? ?IOW: ?what’s at stake, what does his employer and what does the employee stand to lose if he does nothing or fails to catch the hacker?

    Given that hacking is rather pandemic, what makes this case different, makes it special, makes it so important that a movie audience would want to spend the money and time to watch him track down and expose the villain?

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