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One last attempt. Share your thoughts: A bankrupt man ventures into dangerous territory to meet with an old friend who promised him money to pay for his son?s emergency operation.
Good point by Foxtrot25.Taking the logline at face value, it implies that the bulk of the 2nd Act, 50-60 pages is about the protagonist tiptoeing through "dangerous territory". ?But a movie producer has no sense from the logline if the danger zone is hazardous enough, has enough dramatic pitfalls anRead more
Good point by Foxtrot25.
Taking the logline at face value, it implies that the bulk of the 2nd Act, 50-60 pages is about the protagonist tiptoeing through “dangerous territory”. ?But a movie producer has no sense from the logline if the danger zone is hazardous enough, has enough dramatic pitfalls and landmines, to sustain and continually ratchet up the suspense. ?
At what point in the story does the protagonist actually meet his old friend and solicit the money?
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Detroit, the new drug capital of the world?Hmm.Putting that in the parking lot for now, ?now I'm confused. ?What's the unifying action (the plot) ?that drives the action of your story? ? I thought that it was a cop taking down a ruthless drug lord. And having his girlfriend kidnapped was a complicatRead more
Detroit, the new drug capital of the world?
Hmm.
Putting that in the parking lot for now, ?now I’m confused. ?What’s the unifying action (the plot) ?that drives the action of your story? ? I thought that it was a cop taking down a ruthless drug lord. And having his girlfriend kidnapped was a complication, that ups the stakes and tension.
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Loglines are about actions pursued toward an objective goal.Loglines are not about dilemmas ?encountered along the way.
Loglines are about actions pursued toward an objective goal.
Loglines are not about dilemmas ?encountered along the way.
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