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In a grayscale world, a man gets obsessed with the window in his new room beyond which the world is colorful
Well, it's a short film and I like the premise so I suppose I shouldn't get obsessed about the lack of an objective goal.But I will.What does his obsession drive him to do?? Is he just going to stare at the colorful view from FADE IN to FADE OUT?? Or...?
Well, it’s a short film and I like the premise so I suppose I shouldn’t get obsessed about the lack of an objective goal.
But I will.
What does his obsession drive him to do?? Is he just going to stare at the colorful view from FADE IN to FADE OUT?? Or…?
See lessTitle: Curse Genre: Anthology Drama Series Logline: “In early 1800s America, an African slave is granted immortality and fights against the injustice facing the black community through the centuries as a vigilante. Pilot Logline: After a slave is revived from the dead, he struggles to free the other slaves and kill his manipulative plantation owner.
As variable suggested.He's immortal.? He's a SJW with decades to fight slavery, to learn from his mistakes and failures,? to try, try , and try again.? And he can't instigate one successful slave rebellion before the Civil War?? Not one?Not credible even as make-believe, wishful-thinking-history. NoRead more
As variable suggested.
He’s immortal.? He’s a SJW with decades to fight slavery, to learn from his mistakes and failures,? to try, try , and try again.? And he can’t instigate one successful slave rebellion before the Civil War?? Not one?
Not credible even as make-believe, wishful-thinking-history. Not believable given how history actually played out.
If you want an audience to suspend disbelief and buy into the the premise, then the super-awesome protagonist, needs to fight a super-awesome antagonist, someone with equal power but opposite motives. A? SJW needs? a nemesis, should face seemingly insurmountable and believable obstacles.
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See lessFollowing the suicide of a young female veteran, a battle hardened Special Operations soldier must fight to survive his own “silent war” on the homefront.
A topical subject.I suggest the logline would be more effective it if establishes a strong cause and effect between her death and his own suicidal ideation.? Specifically, what is? special about the relationship between the two vets, the emotional connection, that causes her suicide to trigger his iRead more
A topical subject.
I suggest the logline would be more effective it if establishes a strong cause and effect between her death and his own suicidal ideation.? Specifically, what is? special about the relationship between the two vets, the emotional connection, that causes her suicide to trigger his ideation,? that pushes him to the edge of the abyss himself.
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