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A 17 year old punk, with dreams of becoming a professional MMA fighter, comes to terms with his rage, while looking after a deaf blind boy in a rough underclass community.
The logline frames the protagonist's story in terms of his subjective need, his character flaw, his need to control his anger. ?But loglines are about ?plots, and a plots are about achieving ?objective goals, not about overcoming character flaws (although it's ?often implicit that a flaw will have tRead more
The logline frames the protagonist’s story in terms of his subjective need, his character flaw, his need to control his anger. ?But loglines are about ?plots, and a plots are about achieving ?objective goals, not about overcoming character flaws (although it’s ?often implicit that a flaw will have to be overcome to achieve the goal).
So how does “dream of becoming a professional MMA fighter” translate into a specific objective goal? ?What has looking after a deaf, blind boy got to do with either reaching or being deflected from that objective goal?
See lessWhen he discovers the CIA are controlling the public through the media, a sensationalist conspiracy vlogger must decipher their hidden messages to stop their nefarious plans.
In what country is this set?And war against whom?And what's at stake? (Why a war?)
In what country is this set?
And war against whom?
And what’s at stake? (Why a war?)
See lessWhen hunting season nears for the 20th time in his career, a miserable assassin enrolls in his pregnant wife?s yoga and pilates class to rediscover a desire to kill.
Just saying that his general angst needs to be in the framework of a ?specific objective goal. ?Whatever that may be. Why does he need to rediscover his love for the kill if not because he needs it for a specific job? ?What's the specific inciting incident?
Just saying that his general angst needs to be in the framework of a ?specific objective goal. ?Whatever that may be.
Why does he need to rediscover his love for the kill if not because he needs it for a specific job? ?What’s the specific inciting incident?
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