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LOGLINE: A fame obsessed actress with more ambition than talent will must conceal her involvement in the murder of her fianc
As Nir Shelter said. Walter White's objective -- to provide for his family after his death -- is socially acceptable, a motive everyone can ?empathize with ?and accept. ?What is unacceptable is the means he chooses to achieve his objective goal. And in contrast to the actress in this logline, WalterRead more
As Nir Shelter said.
Walter White’s objective — to provide for his family after his death — is socially acceptable, a motive everyone can ?empathize with ?and accept. ?What is unacceptable is the means he chooses to achieve his objective goal.
And in contrast to the actress in this logline, Walter White did not act in the heat of passion. ?His decision was cold, calculated.
See lessA highly cultivated test subject flees the clutches of a CIA organization and must determine the purpose of his program while evading capture from government officials.
>>>Escaping torturous experimentation Do we know that? ?All we learn is that he had special training. ?Whatever, it's not the story hook.To my way of thinking, the first question to answer in writing ?a logline is: ?what is the story hook? ?The logline should be framed around the answer toRead more
>>>Escaping torturous experimentation
Do we know that? ?All we learn is that he had special training. ?Whatever, it’s not the story hook.
To my way of thinking, the first question to answer in writing ?a logline is: ?what is the story hook? ?The logline should be framed around the answer to that question. ?Nir Shelter’s version, better than mine, ?frames the hook of “The Bourne Identity”. ?And the hook is the mystery: ?why/how did the protagonist end up floating unconscious in the Mediterranean?
See lessA highly cultivated test subject flees the clutches of a CIA organization and must determine the purpose of his program while evading capture from government officials.
If so, then:When a man with amnesia realizes he has the skills of an assassin, he must find out his real identity and why others are trying to assassinate him. (28 words)The Bourne Identity
If so, then:
When a man with amnesia realizes he has the skills of an assassin, he must find out his real identity and why others are trying to assassinate him.
(28 words)
The Bourne Identity
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