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When a graffiti outbreak in a small town corresponds with recent child abductions in the county, a nerdy teenage boy has to crack the codes to save the children and become the town hero.
I do not think the inciting incident is weak. ?I would hold back the abduction of a family member (or a love interest) until late in the 2nd Act, a shocking complication that escalates the stakes, makes it more urgent for him to decrypt the graffiti, id and find the culprit.
I do not think the inciting incident is weak. ?I would hold back the abduction of a family member (or a love interest) until late in the 2nd Act, a shocking complication that escalates the stakes, makes it more urgent for him to decrypt the graffiti, id and find the culprit.
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I dunno. ?Seems to mimic the premise of the "Bourne Identity". ?What makes it fresh and different?
I dunno. ?Seems to mimic the premise of the “Bourne Identity”. ?What makes it fresh and different?
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Excellent comment by Richiev about connecting the reader to the character.To which I would add that "Breaking Bad" stands out because the setting and profession of the character were different. ?It wasn't set in Hollyweird , wasn't about show business, wasn't about a failed actor or actress.I did aRead more
Excellent comment by Richiev about connecting the reader to the character.
To which I would add that “Breaking Bad” stands out because the setting and profession of the character were different. ?It wasn’t set in Hollyweird , wasn’t about show business, wasn’t about a failed actor or actress.
I did a quick query on hits for ?posted loglines with the words “actor” or “actress”, came up with over 50 hits. Write a script and logline that stands out because it doesn’t fall back upon the same ol’, same ol’ character and location tropes.
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