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When a zombie outbreak incites a racist massacre in her small Southern town, a pregnant teen must fight the undead – and her own family – to reunite with the child’s black father.
This logline exploits for seemingly gratuitous effect the flammable state of race relations in the United States and perpetuates stereotypes about the South.
This logline exploits for seemingly gratuitous effect the flammable state of race relations in the United States and perpetuates stereotypes about the South.
See lessJohn, Eliza, Jessica, Lily, Mike, Franck, Simon, and Victoria are the characters created in Anonymous? mind. They go through a series of events and happenings that finally make them to understand the difference between reality and dream, and realize the true spirit and nature of their creator, Anonymous.
Eight co-equal characters? ?That's a very difficult sell. ?It's better for a logline and plot to focus on one major character, two at the most in a romance or buddy film.(And, historical drama excepted, proper names are not used in loglines.)What is the specific objective goal of the major characterRead more
Eight co-equal characters? ?That’s a very difficult sell. ?It’s better for a logline and plot to focus on one major character, two at the most in a romance or buddy film.
(And, historical drama excepted, proper names are not used in loglines.)
What is the specific objective goal of the major character? ?How does “understand the difference between reality and dream” translate into a specific objective goal?
And what are the stakes? ?What is lost, what price does the the protagonist pay if (s)he fails? ?What is gained by achieving the objective goal?
And who is the antagonist and/or major obstacle?
Who is Anonymous?
Please check out “Training” at the top of the web page for guidelines for writing an industry acceptable logline.
See lessWhen a simulation algorithm predicts that in order to prevent a deadly attack his daughter must die, an assassin must betray his employers to save her.
I, for one, am not able to get a clear picture of the concept motivating the story. As the logline is currently written, I glimpse a situation where the protagonist becomes trapped between the horns of a dilemma, ?where he's damned-if-he-does, and damned-if-he-doesn't. He can save his daughter -- anRead more
I, for one, am not able to get a clear picture of the concept motivating the story.
As the logline is currently written, I glimpse a situation where the protagonist becomes trapped between the horns of a dilemma, ?where he’s damned-if-he-does, and damned-if-he-doesn’t. He can save his daughter — and then many innocent people will die in some (unspecified) ?attack. ?Or he can let his daughter die — and save the lives of many innocent people. ?But he can’t do both.
A true dilemma is always a good thing in drama, but I’m not sure that is what this story intends to explore.
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