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A savvy, overly confident uni student sets up a food delivery business as a front for drug trafficking, but when his operation is exposed he fakes his death on a hiking trip, but one detective won?t accept his disappearance until the search reveals his body, dead or alive.
Who is the protagonist, the student or the detective? ?If the detective, then the logline needs to be reformulated with the focus on the detective. ?(In this version, the first 32 words -- 2/3 of the logline -- are focused on the ?student.) If the protagonist is the student, ?he's an unsympathetic cRead more
Who is the protagonist, the student or the detective? ?If the detective, then the logline needs to be reformulated with the focus on the detective. ?(In this version, the first 32 words — 2/3 of the logline — are focused on the ?student.)
If the protagonist is the student, ?he’s an unsympathetic character; ?I don’t see anything in the logline to suggest why a movie audience would empathize or be interested in a story focused on him.
See lessA new-born prince abandoned in the wild mountains after a dream terrifies his Grandfather King, survives and returns 18 Years later as the Royal Games Gladiator Winner and to avenge and take the kingdom
As Richiev said. ?Who is the protagonist? ?As a result of the abandoned prince showing up 18 years later, what becomes the dramatic problem? ?What is the protagonist's objective goal?
As Richiev said. ?Who is the protagonist? ?As a result of the abandoned prince showing up 18 years later, what becomes the dramatic problem? ?What is the protagonist’s objective goal?
See lessWhen a black teenager is murdered, two homicide detectives struggle to set aside their differences as racial tensions erupt in 1990’s New Orleans.
>>>and what do racial tensions have to do with them solving the case?In New Orleans, then, and now: everything .The logline appears to capitalize on ?the news hook of the current tension between cops and Blacks in too many American communities. ?However, the logline may need some polishing.Read more
>>>and what do racial tensions have to do with them solving the case?
In New Orleans, then, and now: everything .
The logline appears to capitalize on ?the news hook of the current tension between cops and Blacks in too many American communities. ?However, the logline may need some polishing. ?Why must they ?put aside their differences — because one of them is Black?
And ?they must put asides their differences ?to do what? ?What becomes their objective goal as a result of the murder? Solve the murder — find out who did it? ?Or is there a suspect and they just have to find him? ?And what specifically is the causal link between the murder and erupting racial tensions. ?I mean, I can guess. But I shouldn’t have to. ?Has the murder incited riots and looting?
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