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  1. Posted: September 1, 2016In: Thriller

    When his teenage son is murdered, a detective hesitated to bring the presumed killer to justice, after learning about their secret love affair.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 7:50 am

    What the ?others have said.Particularly FFF. ?Loglines are descriptions of plots and plots are not about a choice that has to be made or hesitating making a choice. ?Loglines are about what happens after a choice is made.

    What the ?others have said.

    Particularly FFF. ?Loglines are descriptions of plots and plots are not about a choice that has to be made or hesitating making a choice. ?Loglines are about what happens after a choice is made.

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2016In: Comedy

    After making his “brain-power-boosting” mixture,a wannabe chemist drinks it,shrinking instead into a little man,who decides to read people?s diaries but reads one which lands him into serious trouble.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 7:46 am

    As Moses99 said. There's no compelling causal motivation between the incident incident and his decision to snoop in people's diaries. ?If he didn't shrink couldn't he still decide to snoop in diaries? It seems to be the case of a situation in search of a ?plot ?with an objective goal, an adversary aRead more

    As Moses99 said.

    There’s no compelling causal motivation between the incident incident and his decision to snoop in people’s diaries. ?If he didn’t shrink couldn’t he still decide to snoop in diaries?

    It seems to be the case of a situation in search of a ?plot ?with an objective goal, an adversary and/or obstacle, and stakes.

    (And are these ‘diaries’ digital or old-fashioned paper & ink?)

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  3. Posted: September 3, 2016In: Thriller

    Orphaned by the War, a linguistic prodigy finds meaning as a Nazi Spy, when she falls for an Allied officer targeted by her team, she must risk it all to save the officer and her humanity.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 7:19 am

    I have the same question as before. ?Why spy on the officer? ?If he's that much of a threat, why not just assassinate him?Is this "inspired by real events" or "based upon a true story" or is it a complete fiction? ?And as noted by Moses99 it's vague, lacks details to establish how it's different froRead more

    I have the same question as before. ?Why spy on the officer? ?If he’s that much of a threat, why not just assassinate him?

    Is this “inspired by real events” or “based upon a true story” or is it a complete fiction? ?And as noted by Moses99 it’s vague, lacks details to establish how it’s different from the 1,001 other war movies. ?Like, her nationality. ? Is she French, Dutch, Danish, Russian, Ukranian? ?And the setting, ?on western front or the eastern?

    And why should an audience be interested and sympathize with a character who chooses to work for the Nazis?

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