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  1. Posted: September 2, 2016In: Examples

    When a passionate playwright finds his muse in a romantic, young woman, disguised as a male actor, they engage in an affair behind the scenes of the production of Romeo and Juliet under the jealous suspicion of the annoying noble to which her aristocratic family has betrothed her.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 9:03 am

    By the 45 minute mark of the 2nd Act the affair is underway; Will has found his muse and the inspiration to write the play. ? So if finding inspiration is his objective goal, he's achieved it. ?Mission more than accomplished.But finding inspiration is not his objective goal. ?What Will must do is wrRead more

    By the 45 minute mark of the 2nd Act the affair is underway; Will has found his muse and the inspiration to write the play. ? So if finding inspiration is his objective goal, he’s achieved it. ?Mission more than accomplished.

    But finding inspiration is not his objective goal. ?What Will must do is write the play. ?That’s his objective goal. The muse is his means to that end, to give him the inspiration to realize his objective goal.

    But complications ensue such that his love life ?not only inspires but mirrors the love story — that’s the hook that sold the script. ?And it’s the conceit that ?makes the film so funny and engaging to watch.

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  2. Posted: September 1, 2016In: Thriller

    When the soul of Al Capone takes over a small Indiana town, an outcast teenager must team up with his bully to find a way to return Capone to his ethereal prison.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 8:31 am

    As the others have said. ?The logline raises more questions than curiosity in my mind.Assuming that I buy the premise of the spirit of Al Capone "taking over a small town" (whatever that means), why of all the people in the town, does it fall to the teenager to locked him up? ?And if non-St. Al coulRead more

    As the others have said. ?The logline raises more questions than curiosity in my mind.

    Assuming that I buy the premise of the spirit of Al Capone “taking over a small town” (whatever that means), why of all the people in the town, does it fall to the teenager to locked him up? ?And if non-St. Al could escape from a prison into which he has been cast by?spirits with far more muscle than a merely mortal?teen, what mojo has the teen got that the spirit powers don’t that will enable him to succeed?

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  3. Posted: September 2, 2016In: SciFi

    As she repeatedly travels back to a Georgia in 1815 from Chicago in 2016, a black woman must figure out how to stop time traveling before a ruthless plantation owner ends up killing her.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 8:19 am

    Kurt Vonnegut used a similar situation in his classic novel "Slaughterhouse Five" which was adapted into a poignant film. ? ?Vonnegut used the uncontrolled, random time traveling of the protagonist, Billy Pilgrim, to frame a slightly fictionalized narrative of his own experience as a POW in World WaRead more

    Kurt Vonnegut used a similar situation in his classic novel “Slaughterhouse Five” which was adapted into a poignant film. ? ?Vonnegut used the uncontrolled, random time traveling of the protagonist, Billy Pilgrim, to frame a slightly fictionalized narrative of his own experience as a POW in World War II and witness/survivor of the hellish fire bombing of Dresden, Germany. ?

    And he used it to frame his theme, that life (and death) just happens, randomly and absurdly.

    What’s the theme you propose to explore with the time traveling story gimmick? ?What’s the point of having a character trapped in a predicament of uncontrollable time travel?

    And wouldn’t it be a stronger objective goal be to not merely save the life of her 1815 version, but to win her freedom? ?I mean extending the logic of the premise (insofar as I can grasp), if she succeeds in stopping the murder of her 1815 self and returns to the safety of her 2016 self — couldn’t the 1815 version still be left in the lurch, enslaved?

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