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  1. Posted: September 3, 2016In: Thriller

    A college student is left to pick up the pieces when his friend and roommate commits suicide, but when it’s discovered that he was hiding a secret past, he begins investigating. only to discover a dark secret about one of his professors that leads him to believe that it wasn’t suicide.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 10:00 am

    The logline expends ?51 words only describing the setup ?for ?the plot instead of describing the plot (ideally in 25 words or less). ?The plot would seem to begin where the logline ends.So what's the plot? ?As a result of the "dark secret" he discovers, what becomes his objective goal?

    The logline expends ?51 words only describing the setup ?for ?the plot instead of describing the plot (ideally in 25 words or less). ?The plot would seem to begin where the logline ends.

    So what’s the plot? ?As a result of the “dark secret” he discovers, what becomes his objective goal?

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  2. Posted: September 3, 2016In: Action

    After an ex-police officer commits suicide, he finds that he must now spend his ‘life’ saving the lives of those who died before their time.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 9:54 am

    So what's his dramatic problem? ?Seems like he's been given a 2nd chance to redeem himself from his 1st life failure. ?(Is this a setup for series or a feature film?)

    So what’s his dramatic problem? ?Seems like he’s been given a 2nd chance to redeem himself from his 1st life failure. ?

    (Is this a setup for series or a feature film?)

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2016In: Thriller

    When the soul of Al Capone takes over a small Indiana town, an outcast teenager must team up with his bully to find a way to return Capone to his ethereal prison.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 9:52 am

    I realize a logline can't answer the questions I've have asked. Nor should it. ??Ideally, a logline ?should sell the plot, ?not raise questions about the credibility of the underlying premises. But this one does raise questions about the credibility of the underlying premises. Why is it up to the teRead more

    I realize a logline can’t answer the questions I’ve have asked. Nor should it. ??Ideally, a logline ?should sell the plot, ?not raise questions about the credibility of the underlying premises.

    But this one does raise questions about the credibility of the underlying premises.

    Why is it up to the teen to lock him back up? ?Why can’t god or the devil do their job?
    If spiritual entities far more potent than a mortal teen couldn’t keep Capone in the celestial cooler, what mojo does the teen have to succeed where god and satan have failed?

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