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Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.
What does "he's caught again" mean? ?Is it that he's in jeopardy of being poisoned again? ?And how long does it take to get the police -- the length of a feature film? ?And what is the connection between the murder he's just witnessed and the previous scandals he's written about? ? And who has he prRead more
What does “he’s caught again” mean? ?Is it that he’s in jeopardy of being poisoned again? ?And how long does it take to get the police — the length of a feature film? ?And what is the connection between the murder he’s just witnessed and the previous scandals he’s written about? ? And who has he previously exposed? ?Who is the threat? A powerful, but corrupt politician? A famous but vindictive celebrity??
Please simplify and clarify what the plot is about.
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See lessAfter his divorce, a middle aged man needs a new lease of life. He achieves it by moving to a foreign country and changing his career.
The logline needs to be more specific. ? What is the foreign country? ?And what is his old career? ?What is his new one? ??What is there about this particular man and the particular country and the particular career that when someone reads the logline they can immediately see that it has the makingsRead more
The logline needs to be more specific. ? What is the foreign country? ?And what is his old career? ?What is his new one? ??What is there about this particular man and the particular country and the particular career that when someone reads the logline they can immediately see that it has the makings for lots of comedy? ?
And if he achieves a new lease on life by changing countries and careers, then what is the dramatic problem? ?It would be better if the logline were framed in such a manner that his ?search for a new lease of life is an open question. ?Maybe he gets a new lease, maybe he doesn’t. ? A logline should never give away the ending.
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See lessWhen his twin brother is murdered, a law student discovers that he was moonlighting as a vigilante; donning his brother’s mask, he takes on the criminal underworld to hunt down his brother’s killers.
Or instead of a physical handicap -- it could be psychological. ?His brother got in such deep and finally fatal trouble because he was extrovert, the more adventurous one, the one who loved to take risks, live on the bleeding edge. ?While his brother was the introvert, the one who always avoided risRead more
Or instead of a physical handicap — it could be psychological. ?His brother got in such deep and finally fatal trouble because he was extrovert, the more adventurous one, the one who loved to take risks, live on the bleeding edge. ?While his brother was the introvert, the one who always avoided risks, played it safe.
Now the the brother has to “put on” his brother’s temperament as well as his clothing and personality. ?And, of course, initially it will be a very uncomfortable fit.
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