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  1. Posted: September 2, 2016In: Examples

    When a passionate playwright finds his muse in a romantic, young woman, disguised as a male actor, they engage in an affair behind the scenes of the production of Romeo and Juliet under the jealous suspicion of the annoying noble to which her aristocratic family has betrothed her.

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    Added an answer on September 2, 2016 at 2:11 am

    Shakespeare in Love:Young Shakespeare, suffering writer's block and eclipsed by his rival Marlowe, is swept up in a passionate romance that inspires and mirrors the break-out play he's struggling to write, "Romeo and Juliet".(32 words)What needs to be in the logline is the name of playwright and theRead more

    Shakespeare in Love:

    Young Shakespeare, suffering writer’s block and eclipsed by his rival Marlowe, is swept up in a passionate romance that inspires and mirrors the break-out play he’s struggling to write, “Romeo and Juliet”.

    (32 words)

    What needs to be in the logline is the name of playwright and the title of the play because that’s the conceit, the sizzle, the hook that sold the script. ? (IMHO,?anyone who doesn’t ?”get” that hook, doesn’t ?know the plot of ?’Romeo and Juliet’, doesn’t belong in show business.)

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  2. Posted: September 1, 2016In: Drama

    When an impoverished single mom is diagnosed with cancer, her teenage son solicits treatment donations by attempting to break the Guinness World Record for continuous wakeboarding of 12 straight hours.

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    Added an answer on September 1, 2016 at 12:32 pm

    Good rewrite, Richiev, and a good question.

    Good rewrite, Richiev, and a good question.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2016In: Action

    After his girl disappears, a vacationing underachiever must interfere in the last heist of a ruthless ageing crook hell-bent on capturing the girl he needs to finish the job.

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    Added an answer on September 1, 2016 at 7:45 am

    For me, the fingerprint is the hook, what sort of differentiates the story. ? It's the gimmick for the heist. ?It explains why he needs the stakes character, the girl. ?(Otherwise, that element of the logline doesn't make sense, seems extraneous.)So yeah, I think it needs to be in the logline.

    For me, the fingerprint is the hook, what sort of differentiates the story. ? It’s the gimmick for the heist. ?It explains why he needs the stakes character, the girl. ?(Otherwise, that element of the logline doesn’t make sense, seems extraneous.)

    So yeah, I think it needs to be in the logline.

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