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When wakeboarding is announced as an Olympic sport, a gold medal hopeful seeks out training from her disgraced, former champion father.
Yeah, it reads like a knock off of the tried and trite formula of a kid with a ?Big Dream who must reconcile with a parental figure in order to make his dream come true.The only novel element is the sport, waterboarding. ?Is that a strong enough to generate interest? ?I dunno.
Yeah, it reads like a knock off of the tried and trite formula of a kid with a ?Big Dream who must reconcile with a parental figure in order to make his dream come true.
The only novel element is the sport, waterboarding. ?Is that a strong enough to generate interest? ?I dunno.
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Well...When his impoverished single mom is diagnosed with cancer, a teenager struggles to raise pledge money for her treatment by trying to break the Guinness World Record for continuous wakeboarding.(30 words)It seems to me there are several struggles?in telling the story and ?in?selling?it .1] PerRead more
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When his impoverished single mom is diagnosed with cancer, a teenager struggles to raise pledge money for her treatment by trying to break the Guinness World Record for continuous wakeboarding.
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It seems to me there are several struggles?in telling the story and ?in?selling?it .
1] Persuading people in the film ?to pledge the money.
2] Getting movie makers in Hollyweird ?to finance the film. ?Is “wakeboarding” a sufficient hook to attract the money? ?Is it strong enough to attract a viewing audience?
3] Imbuing the story with sufficient dramatic tension when it comes time for him to break the record. ?Dramatic tension would arise from a serious character flaw, handicap or complication that threatens to defeat him. Otherwise the 3rd act will be anticlimatic. ?And there’s no hint in the logline of any adversary or complication that threatens to defeat him.
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Why would a spy focus ?time and energy targeting a mere grunt, a soldier? ?What information or access to military intelligence does he have that the Nazis want? ?What makes him such a valuable target?
Why would a spy focus ?time and energy targeting a mere grunt, a soldier? ?What information or access to military intelligence does he have that the Nazis want? ?What makes him such a valuable target?
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