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  1. Posted: December 23, 2016In: Drama

    Geeart1

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    Added an answer on December 24, 2016 at 10:27 pm

    Hello, I personally like when a logline can describe the basic plot of the movie in terms of main character's goal/obstacles. "the world?s most distructive problems in his mind": first, I'd like to know what specific problem or I don't know if i'm interest or not in the movie; secondly, "in his mindRead more

    Hello,
    I personally like when a logline can describe the basic plot of the movie in terms of main character’s goal/obstacles.

    “the world?s most distructive problems in his mind”: first, I’d like to know what specific problem or I don’t know if i’m interest or not in the movie; secondly, “in his mind”? What do we SEE in the movie? The main character face while he’s thinking? 🙂

    The idea of a movie about an autistic artist in very interesting but the logline is not yet there to structure the idea into an understandable and cinematographic form.

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2016In: Comedy

    (REVISED) When a single-minded entrepreneur conducts an unauthorised trial of a ?telepathic phone? in a small town and accidentally transmits a virus that makes everyone lose self-control, she must find a cure with the help of the only uninfected person – a technophobic hippy.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2016 at 12:30 am

    The situation is very interesting and original but I can't imagine?what we will actually see in the movie...what does the entrepreneur DO?with the hyppie? I'm not sure about the logic: it seems to me that the hyppie is uninfected because he didn't use the phone so he's not immune because of some kinRead more

    The situation is very interesting and original but I can’t imagine?what we will actually see in the movie…what does the entrepreneur DO?with the hyppie? I’m not sure about the logic: it seems to me that the hyppie is uninfected because he didn’t use the phone so he’s not immune because of some kind of anticorps to be researched. And if he used the phone, then the his technophobia is kind of irrelevant in the logline. I don’t know.

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2016In: Comedy

    A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2016 at 9:33 pm

    Hello, I see a lack of logic in the logline: [sacrifice her size to save his lover from the mob]. I like the idea of a giant woman starring in Las Vegas.

    Hello,
    I see a lack of logic in the logline: [sacrifice her size to save his lover from the mob].

    I like the idea of a giant woman starring in Las Vegas.

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