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  1. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Comedy

    A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.

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    Added an answer on April 19, 2016 at 6:54 pm

    I miss a main character.

    I miss a main character.

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2016 at 11:54 pm

    Hello, I suggest you to start with the standard logline formula that helps you to detect story problems. for exemple: "When a delusional taxi driver convince himself he's the exterminator angel, he must avenge his customer's wrongs to save his own soul". I don't know if this is true to your story buRead more

    Hello, I suggest you to start with the standard logline formula that helps you to detect story problems.
    for exemple:

    “When a delusional taxi driver convince himself he’s the exterminator angel, he must avenge his customer’s wrongs to save his own soul”.

    I don’t know if this is true to your story but when you put things in this way it’s a lot easier to understand the concept and test its potential.

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2016In: SciFi

    Freeze

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2016 at 11:44 pm

    In my opinion this part needs to be more clear "conquer five world problems". I feel like the whole thing is very conceptual and fails to become a powerful story. Visually, what the characters do in the movie? I can't see it.

    In my opinion this part needs to be more clear “conquer five world problems”.

    I feel like the whole thing is very conceptual and fails to become a powerful story. Visually, what the characters do in the movie? I can’t see it.

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