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In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
Me too I miss a hint about the reaction to the bulling. And I miss some irony - think about good will hunting: an violent orphan / a math genius. ?And I'm not sure how to place the reveal of his mother profession: wouldn't it be the real inciting event? If not, what happens in the movie between theRead more
Me too I miss a hint about the reaction to the bulling. And I miss some irony – think about good will hunting: an violent orphan / a math genius. ?And I’m not sure how to place the reveal of his mother profession: wouldn’t it be the real inciting event? If not, what happens in the movie between the joining the team and the reveal… they happily play basketball:)? One other possibility would be to attach his mother profession to the character description and let this ‘flow’ be the base for the whole movie – this is the most (melo)dramatic device, a secret that is always about to be discoverd.
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Hello, I like this version less than the previous versions - there are the same issues and a few more confusing elements 'thanksgiving dinner with events at the dinner', 'to remedy illogical and family crises in respective locations'.
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See lessI like this version less than the previous versions – there are the same issues and a few more confusing elements ‘thanksgiving dinner with events at the dinner’, ‘to remedy illogical and family crises in respective locations’.
When a group of holidaying students wake up to find themselves buried up to their necks on an isolated beach amidst the rising tide, they are left with nothing but a note telling them they are being watched, and among them is a mole. They must figure out who that is if they want to survive.
Hello, this is a great?beginning. An open air contained thriller. ?With a thicking clock (the tide). You have the initial situation, the next step is to find the end. Who is behind all this? Why? Is is a elaborate prank ? Is it a matter of revenge? I think you need falshbacks, like in the first SawRead more
Hello, this is a great?beginning. An open air contained thriller. ?With a thicking clock (the tide). You have the initial situation, the next step is to find the end. Who is behind all this? Why? Is is a elaborate prank ? Is it a matter of revenge? I think you need falshbacks, like in the first Saw movie.
See lessI think the best method to build a story around this idea is to make one small creative decision at a time and continue until you have all the main elements. If you’re not satisfied start again, change something, start again, and again. It needs time. Think about what you like, what you know – are you an expert in videogames? sports? Have you been betrayed? ever think ?about a painful revenge?