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  1. Posted: June 15, 2016In: Drama

    Seven art students, all of different talents, find themselves trapped in a museum where they rewrite love, beauty and their own humanity before the groups survival overshadows their bohemian lives.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2016 at 9:20 pm

    Hello, i like the basic concept of young artists being trappend in a museum but I miss a clear action line (and a rational reason for them to be trapped).

    Hello,
    i like the basic concept of young artists being trappend in a museum but I miss a clear action line (and a rational reason for them to be trapped).

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2016In: Thriller

    Using a mysterious equation to predict how and when he’ll die, a wealthy businessman must kill a corrupt government official to prevent his untimely demise, but when things go awry he starts to question if he is preventing or creating his fate.

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    Added an answer on May 9, 2016 at 7:32 pm

    Try to reword 'mysterious equation' in a way that express mystery without the word mysterious and in a way that is fully undestandable. Where does he find this equation? There's a book about this, 'The Stochastic Man': the main character is a statistics expert, maybe the 'equation' is advanced statiRead more

    Try to reword ‘mysterious equation’ in a way that express mystery without the word mysterious and in a way that is fully undestandable. Where does he find this equation? There’s a book about this, ‘The Stochastic Man’: the main character is a statistics expert, maybe the ‘equation’ is advanced statistics?

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2016In: Comedy

    When a traitor agent quits and takes their biggest star to a competitor, the staff of “UNDERDOGS”, a boutique Talent Agency for Dogs: its owner, a bellicose no-nonsense New Yorker; a casting director, a debonair bitter out of place old-timer; and a casting agent, an aspiring actress more interested to getting cast herself than casting man’s best friends, scramble to find a replacement for a huge German Beer commercial; if they don’t, their agency will go to dogs. In the ensuing pandemonium a receptionist sees a big opportunity for his poodle. But will the Germans accept a French Poodle as a substitute of Saint Bernard and will the French Poodle be able to overcome his stage fright? The “Underdogs” better find out the answers soon, because the German patience is running thin and they are that close to kissing “Underdogs” Auf Wiedersehen.

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    Added an answer on April 20, 2016 at 7:12 pm

    Hello, this could be a funny movie but as a logline... I suggest you to read some logline tutorials like the training page on this very website or anythink you trust on google.

    Hello,
    this could be a funny movie but as a logline… I suggest you to read some logline tutorials like the training page on this very website or anythink you trust on google.

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