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  1. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Action

    Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ?Bug Collector? fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 23, 2017 at 11:35 pm

    A problem I see is that you made your antagonist invisible and speechless. The Dustin Hoffman movie worked because it was mostly about saving a divorce situation and then their own lives. The later antagonistic force was the Sutherland military option.

    A problem I see is that you made your antagonist invisible and speechless. The Dustin Hoffman movie worked because it was mostly about saving a divorce situation and then their own lives. The later antagonistic force was the Sutherland military option.

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2017In: Horror

    Trapped inside their family cottage, a group of detached siblings must battle a vengeful witch and break a centuries old curse on their family.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 23, 2017 at 11:31 pm

    Good advice. Another angle could include a deadline that they have to complete this by or else something worse happens

    Good advice. Another angle could include a deadline that they have to complete this by or else something worse happens

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Action

    Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ?Bug Collector? fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 22, 2017 at 9:11 pm

    So this is about a virus and not the actual bug? The bug is simply how he gets to the island?

    So this is about a virus and not the actual bug? The bug is simply how he gets to the island?

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