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A rookie Senator facing his first vote reevaluates his platform and priorities when his wife is murdered in a mass shooting.
This sounds interesting about exploring not only the challenges politicians face from exterior forces, but now you turned it about inner motives. I assume you are tackling gun control head on with this? I don't much care for how rookie senator sounds. Perhaps young senator sounds better?
This sounds interesting about exploring not only the challenges politicians face from exterior forces, but now you turned it about inner motives. I assume you are tackling gun control head on with this?
I don’t much care for how rookie senator sounds. Perhaps young senator sounds better?
See lessA drop-dead gorgeous mute is bartered into a harem where beauty is a death sentence and she must find her voice to survive.
Do mutes often find their voices? So they kill beautiful people? That's different. Run with it. But why? A hot chick who can't talk? Sounds like a win win -- ;) Ha.
Do mutes often find their voices? So they kill beautiful people? That’s different. Run with it. But why?
A hot chick who can’t talk? Sounds like a win win — 😉 Ha.
See lessWhen his medication stops working, a divorced writer must relive the inception of his MYSTERIOUS ILLNESS to remember how he stopped it as a child. (26)
Billy, I don't like "When his medication stops working" this sounds tiny to me. Unworthy of a movie, tbh. If your premise involves a bunch of flashbacks, that will work against you when pros read your screenplay. They don't like them much. My advice to you is to rewrite this in the present, begin wiRead more
Billy,
I don’t like “When his medication stops working” this sounds tiny to me. Unworthy of a movie, tbh.
If your premise involves a bunch of flashbacks, that will work against you when pros read your screenplay. They don’t like them much.
My advice to you is to rewrite this in the present, begin with a young patient then forward ahead to the dilema.
An untreatable illness causes a writer to…
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