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Fallen in love with Christ, a young Muslim girl finds out that her existence depends upon her recognition of the truth – she’s in love with a non-existent person – her seek for truth only leads her to reveal her true nature – goodness and curiosity – questions asked and answered, her seek – immortality.
Eliminate the specific faiths for the purpose of the logline... A young girl looks to another faith, but immediately finds that her mortality may lie with a false deity.
Eliminate the specific faiths for the purpose of the logline…
A young girl looks to another faith, but immediately finds that her mortality may lie with a false deity.
See lessWhen a young emigrant in arranged marriage, falls in love with a Norwegian Christian man, they must stop her dishonored betrothed, before he kills them both.
You mention arranged marriage and also betrothed both in the same sentence - no need. After falling in love with an outsider, a young woman flees an arranged marriage and the family who wants to enact revenge for her dishonor.
You mention arranged marriage and also betrothed both in the same sentence – no need.
After falling in love with an outsider, a young woman flees an arranged marriage and the family who wants to enact revenge for her dishonor.
See lessFallen in love with Christ, a young Muslim girl finds out that her existence depends upon her recognition of the truth – she’s in love with a non-existent person – her seek for truth only leads her to reveal her true nature – goodness and curiosity – questions asked and answered, her seek – immortality.
It also reads very clunky. I'd work on the flow to smooth en out the hook. Eliminate the names, Neero and Sara are unfamiliar to me, adjectives work better in loglines.
It also reads very clunky. I’d work on the flow to smooth en out the hook. Eliminate the names, Neero and Sara are unfamiliar to me, adjectives work better in loglines.
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