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Another rewrite: When a young Muslim woman with dream for true love finds love outside her faith, her betrothed seeks to avenge his honor and the honor of his family.
Benneth, Kinda wish you would keep this in 1 solid thread, but... When a young Muslim woman looks for true love outside of her faith, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs. If you have a solid story about struggle and of course, a love story, then you have something that producers want to makRead more
Benneth,
Kinda wish you would keep this in 1 solid thread, but…
When a young Muslim woman looks for true love outside of her faith, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.
If you have a solid story about struggle and of course, a love story, then you have something that producers want to make.
Good luck.
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Benneth, Sorry to say that I like the last version better.
Benneth,
Sorry to say that I like the last version better.
See lessA rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.
Exactly as DPG asks, the timeline has a lot to do with this, or does it?In civilized Western society, I would expect these fear and consequences to be something from the past, the way past. However, reality suggests that the faith in question could very well be current times. Unfortunately."Non" souRead more
Exactly as DPG asks, the timeline has a lot to do with this, or does it?
In civilized Western society, I would expect these fear and consequences to be something from the past, the way past. However, reality suggests that the faith in question could very well be current times. Unfortunately.
“Non” sounds better than using “None”.
“Young Muslim woman” is fine. I’d change to: “falls in love outside of her faith” or something like that. This way you don’t mention Muslim 2x in the same sentence.
When a young Muslim woman falls in love outside of her faith, her betrothed seeks to avenge his honor and the honor of his family.
We still don’t know anything about what magnitude this escape plan is or if we should be rooting for the woman or the betrayed fiance. Is this a chase movie or a religious biopic? The non-Muslim seems to be the outsider or victim here. Do we root for him? Probably not.
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