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The Descent to Madness: After his last movie bombed and a stint in rehab, a drug addicted movie mogul returns to his studio to find his best director on the verge of insanity while filming their comeback vehicle, starring the woman they both love.
You sure you have the rights to do a Ben Afflack bio? Haha Try writing into this log that the Protag must decide between the girl or the comeback.
You sure you have the rights to do a Ben Afflack bio? Haha
Try writing into this log that the Protag must decide between the girl or the comeback.
See lessA dissatisfied 30-something-year-old woman risks her long-term relationship to figure out if she?s missing out on a more exciting and passionate love life.
If she's dissatisfied with her relationship, then what is she really risking? Enter children then you have something there. The way you have it written, this woman is not someone I can root for to succeed with this plot. Any other stakes you can mention?
If she’s dissatisfied with her relationship, then what is she really risking? Enter children then you have something there. The way you have it written, this woman is not someone I can root for to succeed with this plot.
Any other stakes you can mention?
See lessThanks to a translator biochip, nobody has to speak the same language anymore. When the young CTO of the company responsible for this groundbreaking technology discovers their imminent firmware release has been hacked, she is against the clock to save everyone from bio warfare.
As DK already posted, the first thing that was confusing was the relationship between a language translation subject and then bio warfare. That has to be bridged somehow or scrapped completely. I hope your plot is sound enough not to actually have one lead to the other by some chance. That would beRead more
As DK already posted, the first thing that was confusing was the relationship between a language translation subject and then bio warfare. That has to be bridged somehow or scrapped completely.
I hope your plot is sound enough not to actually have one lead to the other by some chance. That would be a plot hole hard to fix.
On the plus side, a universal translator is? an interesting idea to explore, albeit, not a fresh one.
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