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An alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.
The audience would need to identify with the aliens over the humans. How could you pull that off easily? Even Avatar had the aggressive human side provide the protagonist.Be careful you don't write this as an anti-human story, unless you have the distribution set for an alien world already ;)
The audience would need to identify with the aliens over the humans. How could you pull that off easily? Even Avatar had the aggressive human side provide the protagonist.
Be careful you don’t write this as an anti-human story, unless you have the distribution set for an alien world already 😉
See lessWhen the mentor of ruthless assassin/lone wolf cop is murdered, the assassin/cop bands his team of skilled corrupt cops/best friends together to find the one responsible.
Also, don't use / three times like that. It's too much. Matter of fact, I wouldn't use it at all, IMO.
Also, don’t use / three times like that. It’s too much. Matter of fact, I wouldn’t use it at all, IMO.
See lessAfter several defeats, a determined young boxer prepares for a last chance to reignite his career while dealing with his unsupportive family and the hoodlums he grew up with.
This sounds promising, albeit, done before. If it's just another "boxer trying to break out of the hood" story can you think about what makes yours stand out and add that into the log? Is it the antagonists? His family in particular? What genre can you mix with this that we haven't seen before?
This sounds promising, albeit, done before. If it’s just another “boxer trying to break out of the hood” story can you think about what makes yours stand out and add that into the log?
Is it the antagonists? His family in particular? What genre can you mix with this that we haven’t seen before?
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