1. Posted: March 4, 2018In:

    (Re-post) Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    This reads somewhat clunky and not very unique story-wise. My take: A civil-war soldier must recruit help to seek justice against the vicious gang that has left him for dead.

    This reads somewhat clunky and not very unique story-wise.

    My take:

    A civil-war soldier must recruit help to seek justice against the vicious gang that has left him for dead.

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2018In:

    Realizing her kingdom is coming downhill, a determined Egyptian Goddess, has one night to acquire freedom for her kidnapped chosen one lover from the selfish controlling Prince of Egypt, to take his rightful place and restore peace into his kingdom.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    As is this is a tad too long and needs to be trimmed. Is this based on existing story?

    As is this is a tad too long and needs to be trimmed. Is this based on existing story?

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2018In:

    After their identities are stolen, a young couple need to find their enemies, fast.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Okay, who the hell swaps houses? How about "After a real estate purchase,...."

    Okay, who the hell swaps houses?

    How about “After a real estate purchase,….”

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