Bad syntax in the log.

So, obviously, based on your description, you hate on the rich, and in order for that to work in your story, you need an audience who sympathizes with the hatred. Guess what, that isn’t reality. All people aspire to be rich. Name someone who doesn’t? Some make it. Some don’t.

You don’t need post-apocalyptic scenarios to cement how money protects a family and also it’s well-being. It does do that and it always has. Good thing, too. It gives people hope and a means to strive for the greatness of it’s fruits.

Rich can rich today, poor tomorrow. Poor can be poor today and rich tomorrow. It constantly changes. Someone write about that for a change.

Imagine a fiction where there is no hope at all. Imagine a world where even the poor will never have a chance to be rich? That’s apocalyptic, IMO.