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  1. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After refusing to do a job, a contract is put out on him where he must decide between his survival and the life of his target.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 18, 2018 at 11:04 pm

    Kinda lazily written as is. Briefly describe the job. The protagonist can't just be called: HIM. Add an isolation/goal so that this guy has a chance of winning. This would be a start to the already mentioned lack of a hook by Richiev

    Kinda lazily written as is.

    Briefly describe the job. The protagonist can’t just be called: HIM. Add an isolation/goal so that this guy has a chance of winning.

    This would be a start to the already mentioned lack of a hook by Richiev

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  2. Posted: February 15, 2018In: Comedy

    Spike a shy, autistic football genius finds a teams playbook, easily memorizes it, then morphs into a gregarious man about town while helping the head coach win the big game

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2018 at 12:42 am

    basically, this story glorifies cheating and stealing into something that we, hard working people should get behind and root for? i think not.

    basically, this story glorifies cheating and stealing into something that we, hard working people should get behind and root for? i think not.

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2018In: Thriller

    When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the dark secrets of their small town and a possible serial killer among the town?s elite.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 15, 2018 at 8:25 pm

    The movie "A Time to Kill" used race effectively... In Canton, Mississippi, a fearless young lawyer and his assistant defend a black man accused of murdering two white men who raped his 10-year-old daughter, inciting violent retribution and revenge from the Ku Klux Klan.

    The movie “A Time to Kill” used race effectively…

    In Canton, Mississippi, a fearless young lawyer and his assistant defend a black man accused of murdering two white men who raped his 10-year-old daughter, inciting violent retribution and revenge from the Ku Klux Klan.

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