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Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.
As Craig demonstrates the much needed shortening of the OP.
As Craig demonstrates the much needed shortening of the OP.
See lessWhen a haunted family discovers that the ghosthunters they hired are criminals who capture then use ghosts for crime, the family must team up with the ghosts to take down the frauds.
Obviously, the ghosts would come off as unwanted at first but later be represented as the emotional-garnering people who the MC realizes are now worth saving from the antagonists. This is classic Spielberg misdirection here. And that's also where the character arc would come from. Pretty sure we areRead more
Obviously, the ghosts would come off as unwanted at first but later be represented as the emotional-garnering people who the MC realizes are now worth saving from the antagonists. This is classic Spielberg misdirection here. And that’s also where the character arc would come from.
Pretty sure we aren’t talking about the pest removal of bugs here. 😮
See lessWhen a haunted family discovers that the ghosthunters they hired are criminals who capture then use ghosts for crime, the family must team up with the ghosts to take down the frauds.
Revealing that they start out 'wanting the ghosts removed' and then eventually need to team up with the unwanted ghosts may not be a good idea for the logline. Capturing ghosts and forcing them to commit crimes is, however, brilliant. Focus on a protagonist in the family. Come up with a ticking timeRead more
Revealing that they start out ‘wanting the ghosts removed’ and then eventually need to team up with the unwanted ghosts may not be a good idea for the logline.
Capturing ghosts and forcing them to commit crimes is, however, brilliant.
Focus on a protagonist in the family.
Come up with a ticking time bomb and a ‘or else…’ and you are in business.
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