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  1. Posted: September 26, 2017In: Adventure

    A lost orphan, hunted by brutal and corrupt miners, sets out on a thrilling adventure across the Australian desert in search of her new home.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 27, 2017 at 3:22 am

    Why is a lost orphan a threat to miners? If all she wants to do is settle down into a new home then why wouldn't the miners let her just do that and then be done with her altogether?

    Why is a lost orphan a threat to miners? If all she wants to do is settle down into a new home then why wouldn’t the miners let her just do that and then be done with her altogether?

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  2. Posted: September 27, 2017In: Drama

    When an extremely silent zookeeper loses a tiger in a tragic accident, her only chance of keeping her job is to negotiate with the peculiar caregivers of a traumatised former circus tiger.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 27, 2017 at 3:03 am

    Good point, dpg. Easy to fix, just change the word negotiate to save or something like that.I don't like silent to descibe the MC. Surely you can come up with a better and ironic? deficiency for a zookeeper.When a ____ zookeeper is held responsible for the death of a tiger, her only chance of savingRead more

    Good point, dpg. Easy to fix, just change the word negotiate to save or something like that.

    I don’t like silent to descibe the MC. Surely you can come up with a better and ironic? deficiency for a zookeeper.

    When a ____ zookeeper is held responsible for the death of a tiger, her only chance of saving her job and career is to rehabilitate a former circus tiger to take its place.

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2017In: Comedy

    When a meltdown started accidentally by a butter sandwich opens a time vortex in a lonely computer geek?s house, he and two previous inhabitants thrown in the present by the vortex, must save the planet from an alien warrior race who thinks humans are unfit to handle time travel.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 26, 2017 at 4:59 am

    One thing a person hanging on this site should learn quickly is that clarity and economics are king to a logline. Sorry to say, I can't find either in your logline. This first part of your log is silly and outrageous, and that works for a comedy. But then you end the log with a serious situation. I'Read more

    One thing a person hanging on this site should learn quickly is that clarity and economics are king to a logline.

    Sorry to say, I can’t find either in your logline.

    This first part of your log is silly and outrageous, and that works for a comedy. But then you end the log with a serious situation.

    I’d say pick one.

    A trio of nerds must find the courage to close a vortex that has opened in their kitchen before time-travelling aliens take over Earth.

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