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After a happy-go-lucky Marine survives an assassination attempt, he goes after the man behind it, a rogue officer, and stop him from selling WMDs to the government of an enemy planet.
Ya, Nir, it's posted in the scifi category which is why I added "A(n) inter-galactic marine" to my version. These types of chase stories do better if there is something personal involved, such as the marine is chasing his brother or something like that.
Ya, Nir, it’s posted in the scifi category which is why I added “A(n) inter-galactic marine” to my version.
These types of chase stories do better if there is something personal involved, such as the marine is chasing his brother or something like that.
See lessAfter a happy-go-lucky Marine survives an assassination attempt, he goes after the man behind it, a rogue officer, and stop him from selling WMDs to the government of an enemy planet.
I'd remove "happy go lucky" and seriously think of some better way to describe your protagonist. Usually people arent targeted for assassination for no reason. Why? What has the marine lost that is dear to him? A inter-galactic marine must stop a terrorist from selling WMD's to the government of anRead more
I’d remove “happy go lucky” and seriously think of some better way to describe your protagonist.
Usually people arent targeted for assassination for no reason. Why?
What has the marine lost that is dear to him?
A inter-galactic marine must stop a terrorist from selling WMD’s to the government of an enemy planet before…
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Write your logs for the layman.
Write your logs for the layman.
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