1. Posted: September 4, 2017In:

    Present day, UK: A son flees his father?s wrath after his mother is accidentally killed but members of their martial arts family are driven to take sides and the inevitable showdown threatens to destroy them all.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Focus on the struggle that the son has vs the father, otherwise, this is just another martial arts fight movie. Give us something about the time period this is set in. Is it present time or past? Where will the theater of combat take place and is there larger forces at work to mention?

    Focus on the struggle that the son has vs the father, otherwise, this is just another martial arts fight movie.

    Give us something about the time period this is set in. Is it present time or past? Where will the theater of combat take place and is there larger forces at work to mention?

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  2. Posted: September 3, 2017In:

    When a star-struck young buck is forced to hide out in an off-grid commune to evade the police, using the identity he constructed to attain his anonymity allows him to win over the group, who decides to make him their new leader, even after he confesses to a past crime.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Also, we are way too long at this point as well. Shorten.

    Also, we are way too long at this point as well. Shorten.

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2017In:

    Falling in love while helping a cat woman return to her Earth alone leaves an insular college student struggling to maintain his belief in her and find a way through the gateway.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Cat woman in outer space? Sign me up! College student is the protagonist? ?I recommend focusing the log on him and his conflict and struggles, which is, I assume, the gateway?

    Cat woman in outer space? Sign me up!

    College student is the protagonist? ?I recommend focusing the log on him and his conflict and struggles, which is, I assume, the gateway?

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