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When an FBI agent is called to investigate the murder of a teenage girl, he is thrust into the underworld of a small wooded town in the Pacific Northwest. A surreal and introspective look into the corruption of the American Dream.
Aren't they remaking it, or has that been a bust?
Aren’t they remaking it, or has that been a bust?
See lessWhen an FBI agent is called to investigate the murder of a teenage girl, he is thrust into the underworld of a small wooded town in the Pacific Northwest. A surreal and introspective look into the corruption of the American Dream.
Shyla, I like the first part of this, although it lacks an urgency or specific stake other than solving a murder. What else can you add about the 2nd and 3rd acts? I'm not too sure about what you mean with the the second line, how it fits into your story, or why you even need to use it at all.
Shyla,
I like the first part of this, although it lacks an urgency or specific stake other than solving a murder. What else can you add about the 2nd and 3rd acts?
I’m not too sure about what you mean with the the second line, how it fits into your story, or why you even need to use it at all.
See lessAn uptight business man races against the clock to find a way out of purgatory or risks to lose his life.
This:?An uptight business man that neglects his family just doesn't go well with this:?winds up in the land of the dead and must find a way out or risks losing his life. What does 1 have to do with the other? A busy Grim Reaper mistakenly sends a overworked ?business man to the land of the dead wherRead more
This:?An uptight business man that neglects his family
just doesn’t go well with this:?winds up in the land of the dead and must find a way out or risks losing his life.
What does 1 have to do with the other?
A busy Grim Reaper mistakenly sends a overworked ?business man to the land of the dead where he must find a way out and back to his family before a portal seals forever.
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