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Two females of an ancient African tribe who morph into elephants save the life of a young girl but the village witch doctor sees them as abominations and issues their deaths.
As Nir so thoughtfully laid out. Those are the first things that jump front and center after reading the log.I would begin this...After two shape shifters save the life of a young villager, they expose themselves to a witch doctor hellbent on destroying them.
As Nir so thoughtfully laid out. Those are the first things that jump front and center after reading the log.
I would begin this…
After two shape shifters save the life of a young villager, they expose themselves to a witch doctor hellbent on destroying them.
See lessDesperate to keep her sister out of the drug trade a jaded girl makes one last drug run for her dealer who has set her up for a hit mistakenly suspecting she is a confidential informant.
Craig, How about describing more about the dealer, instead of just the avg. "her dealer" Why is this guy going to be a handful for the MC to negotiate with?
Craig,
How about describing more about the dealer, instead of just the avg. “her dealer” Why is this guy going to be a handful for the MC to negotiate with?
See lessA unacknowledged nerd-jock joins the Tycan collective to save earth from the devastating Kirillian armada, and humanity from itself.
nocturne, What I don't like is that you aren't describing these waring factions the way a layman would. "An unacknowledged nerd-jock" What does that mean? unacknowledged by whom? How can someone be a nerd and a jock at the same time? Wasn't there entire movies that laid the groundwork establishing tRead more
nocturne,
What I don’t like is that you aren’t describing these waring factions the way a layman would.
“An unacknowledged nerd-jock” What does that mean? unacknowledged by whom? How can someone be a nerd and a jock at the same time? Wasn’t there entire movies that laid the groundwork establishing the huge difference between the 2?
“Tycan collective” means nothing to me, as well as “Kirillian Armada” means nothing to me. They are devastating, so I guess they are the evil side?
An outsider uses his knowledge of physics after joining a resistance group to battle a ruthless armada intent on enslaving the entire universe.
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