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  1. Posted: December 29, 2012In: Public

    Being forbidden to love maakes managing the world's perception of love easy. But when Rose experiences love for himself he puts his job and existence at stake.

    gman902105
    Added an answer on December 29, 2012 at 3:36 pm

    See the above comment and let me know. That would be awesome!

    See the above comment and let me know. That would be awesome!

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2012In: Public

    Being forbidden to love maakes managing the world's perception of love easy. But when Rose experiences love for himself he puts his job and existence at stake.

    gman902105
    Added an answer on December 29, 2012 at 3:34 pm

    Rose = Eros = Cupid (get it?) so yes its worth the trouble for me personally. If guys can get away with "Ashley" and girls with "jack" then I don't mind. Would changing Perception of "love" to "romance" clear up some confusion? I see I always confuse people with my log-lines. People can love, it's jRead more

    Rose = Eros = Cupid (get it?) so yes its worth the trouble for me personally. If guys can get away with “Ashley” and girls with “jack” then I don’t mind.

    Would changing Perception of “love” to “romance” clear up some confusion? I see I always confuse people with my log-lines.

    People can love, it’s just that they THINK they fall in love, but most of the time someone like Rose is pulling the strings. So it isn’t Rose controlling if people love or not, but rather how they process the idea to keep people in the illusion of true love exists or what have you.

    I tried putting the irony there by having Rose do his job but then break the rule that allows him to do his job effectively.

    Of course I don’t have paragraphs likes these to describe the movie so If I didn’t communicate these things effectively how can I do so?

    Thanks for your help! I really appreciate it.

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  3. Posted: December 19, 2012In: Public

    John always used his clairvoyance as a crutch but when he sees himself killing an unknown woman, he must escape the crosshairs of the all-seeing organization KEN.

    gman902105
    Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 5:19 am

    Hopefully the revision clears some things up. I couldn't help but sound like minority report in a way. But your first guess is right. An organization of clairvoyants.

    Hopefully the revision clears some things up. I couldn’t help but sound like minority report in a way. But your first guess is right. An organization of clairvoyants.

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