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  1. Posted: August 3, 2012In: Public

    In a distant future the Milky Way's Sun dead, which China has used as an opportunity to initiate a global take over. However a young naive scientist discovers a way for Sun crisis to be solved, thus making her a target on a global scale and initiating WWIII.

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    Added an answer on August 3, 2012 at 4:23 pm

    I guess I'm not clear. The sun is already dead. the problem being solved is in fact a "new sun" I imagine in the first 10 minutes of the screenplay i setup the fact that the sun dies and what happens to the world, then afterward is the post apocalyptic scenario. I really like the "hinder a nations gRead more

    I guess I’m not clear. The sun is already dead. the problem being solved is in fact a “new sun” I imagine in the first 10 minutes of the screenplay i setup the fact that the sun dies and what happens to the world, then afterward is the post apocalyptic scenario.

    I really like the “hinder a nations goal for global supremacy”

    I feel like I still explained that roughly.

    Anyhow the character flaw is naivety and daddy issues basically I imagine. It may change though. The naivety isn’t with science but with the state of the current world (seclusion) comes into play as well. Lemme know what you think thanks alot.

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  2. Posted: August 3, 2012In: Examples

    A future where criminals are arrested before the crime occurs, a drug addicted cop struggles on the lam to prove his innocence for a murder he has not yet committed.

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    Added an answer on August 3, 2012 at 2:37 pm

    Treading "Minority Report" territory here. What's different about yours? Besides the cop being drug addicted.

    Treading “Minority Report” territory here. What’s different about yours? Besides the cop being drug addicted.

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  3. Posted: August 3, 2012In: Public

    Two Missionaries traveling from door to door on their mission of good must now fight for their lives when they knock on the wrong door riddled with evil.

    gman902105
    Added an answer on August 3, 2012 at 2:31 pm

    You have irony which is awesome. I guess a little more about the missionaries to make us care about them more.

    You have irony which is awesome. I guess a little more about the missionaries to make us care about them more.

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