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John always used his clairvoyance as a crutch but when he sees himself killing an unknown woman, he must escape the crosshairs of the all-seeing organization KEN.
When a clairvoyant sees himself killing a woman he can't see, he must escape the crosshairs of the all-seeing organization KEN, whose kidnapping others just like him. Not sure about how many words should be in the logline, one person said 27, another 30, another 25. So I aimed for 27 which made thisRead more
When a clairvoyant sees himself killing a woman he can’t see, he must escape the crosshairs of the all-seeing organization KEN, whose kidnapping others just like him.
Not sure about how many words should be in the logline, one person said 27, another 30, another 25. So I aimed for 27 which made this insanely hard because the woman being unknown isn’t the bite. But I swapped out “he can’t see” for “unknown” to save space. I was wondering if i should also swap clairvoyant for psychic but that was me just trying to sound different.
See lessA brilliant but destructive singer, struggling to get signed, must overcome her addictions before she destroys her band and her life.
The irony is there, as well as a good insight to the concept. The only things I would say is leave some room for the reader to be in suspense. Also reword it so that you can leave yourself some room to entice the reader. A brilliant but destructive singer lets her addictions get in the way of her baRead more
The irony is there, as well as a good insight to the concept. The only things I would say is leave some room for the reader to be in suspense. Also reword it so that you can leave yourself some room to entice the reader.
A brilliant but destructive singer lets her addictions get in the way of her band getting signed, ______________.
Don’t need “life” that’s a given.
Room for info on another conflict or describe antaganist or etc. Less words more room for other stuff. Good Luck.
See lessA future where criminals are arrested before the crime occurs, a drug addicted cop struggles on the lam to prove his innocence for a murder he has not yet committed.
My bad I'm blind, and an idiot, so sorry mate.
My bad I’m blind, and an idiot, so sorry mate.
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