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  1. Posted: March 17, 2015In: Public

    In 'Found Photos' style, a pair of Google Street View car drivers unknowingly take a photo of a dangerous cult performing a ritualistic killing in a remote field and are pursued by them. Detectives are left with an abandoned car and a series of mysterious photos in order to find the pair before it's too late. (Inspired by these types of lists – http://www.viralnova.com/creepiest-things-on-google-maps/

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 5:24 pm

    The theme is great in my opinion, the logline needs to be elaborated as the other commenters also mentioned.

    The theme is great in my opinion, the logline needs to be elaborated as the other commenters also mentioned.

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  2. Posted: March 17, 2015In: Public

    Based on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer?s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 5:22 pm

    I don't think you should be afraid of the length of the story. I would certainly keep the original story, and do some research on the officer husband, e.g. was he looking for his family, was he doing his own investigation about them? This could already develop it to a feature film. Even if not, it cRead more

    I don’t think you should be afraid of the length of the story. I would certainly keep the original story, and do some research on the officer husband, e.g. was he looking for his family, was he doing his own investigation about them? This could already develop it to a feature film. Even if not, it could be a very powerful short film!

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 7:25 am

    Thanks Rutger! FFF - how about you, would you suggest one of the loglines from above or an alternate version for them?

    Thanks Rutger!

    FFF – how about you, would you suggest one of the loglines from above or an alternate version for them?

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