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  1. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 7:50 pm

    Hi FFF and thanks for your thoughts! At this point I am out of ideas on the nightmare part of the logline, I would welcome any suggestions for a situation where a couple faces sins they committed against each other, against their relationship. The first logline featured the Masked Psycho and his aggRead more

    Hi FFF and thanks for your thoughts! At this point I am out of ideas on the nightmare part of the logline, I would welcome any suggestions for a situation where a couple faces sins they committed against each other, against their relationship.

    The first logline featured the Masked Psycho and his aggressive killer Dog, but as you can read above, it was removed.

    I looked up the Monster in the House concept, and you are right, my story falls in this (sub)genre. I also checked Blake Snyder who wrote very popular books, but I was disappointed about his IMDB filmography. He is not the first one whom I see as a good teacher with very few results. Maybe I’m wrong.

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 4:58 pm

    Hi Lee, thanks for the comment! I think we are looking for a word that expresses the state when you are not yet breaking up, but not in heat anymore as well. A state where the partners are not putting much effort anymore into their relationship, probably they are already looking outside, but still nRead more

    Hi Lee, thanks for the comment!

    I think we are looking for a word that expresses the state when you are not yet breaking up, but not in heat anymore as well. A state where the partners are not putting much effort anymore into their relationship, probably they are already looking outside, but still not at the brink of breaking up. Say they were in love for 3 years with great emotions, ture love and for the last 8-12 months it has changed.

    Maybe they don’t dare to break up. They don’t know yet, maybe they just don’t admit for a reason, but an outside spectator would realise that they should break up. However they are not warring, they are not yelling at each other, they have gone maybe a bit apathic even.

    Hope I could describe it better with these details!

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2015In: Public

    When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 4:11 am

    Maybe something like: Disinherited because of her lack of interest in the family farming business, gamer daughter returns home to save his father's life by winning an online gaming championship?

    Maybe something like:

    Disinherited because of her lack of interest in the family farming business, gamer daughter returns home to save his father’s life by winning an online gaming championship?

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