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  1. Posted: March 17, 2015In: Public

    Based on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer?s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 7:22 am

    Hi Rutger, I think it is great to see the story in more detail. I would be interested in watching a movie about this event! Why mix the officer and why alternate events? I think it is just a good story itself. There is great power in the confusion of the viewer about the moral dilemmas listed here.Read more

    Hi Rutger, I think it is great to see the story in more detail. I would be interested in watching a movie about this event!

    Why mix the officer and why alternate events? I think it is just a good story itself. There is great power in the confusion of the viewer about the moral dilemmas listed here. Just great.

    Thus the logline in my opinion should be about this story, you don’t need the officer.

    Something like:

    A wife of a Nazi officer and her two sons board a Jew transport train to death camp Treblinka by mistake – they want out, but the Reich is not very easy on giving away its secrets…

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  2. Posted: March 15, 2015In: Public

    When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 9:34 pm

    I love this last one, would love to see it directed by Kevin Smith :-) starring the Dogma cast with Salma Hayek in the lead role, Alan Rickman standing in for the late George Carlin as the father, team of Brian O'Halloran, Jason Mewes, Chris Rock and of course Kevin Smith. :-D

    I love this last one, would love to see it directed by Kevin Smith 🙂 starring the Dogma cast with Salma Hayek in the lead role, Alan Rickman standing in for the late George Carlin as the father, team of Brian O’Halloran, Jason Mewes, Chris Rock and of course Kevin Smith. 😀

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Gabor Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 8:03 pm

    Updated the nightmare part to something new. Let's hear your voice! :-) Here are the earlier versions sorted by date modified latest to first: ? An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to experience a therapy that turns into their worst nightmares ? An estraRead more

    Updated the nightmare part to something new. Let’s hear your voice! 🙂

    Here are the earlier versions sorted by date modified latest to first:

    ? An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to experience a therapy that turns into their worst nightmares
    ? An estranged couple decides for a counseling retreat in the woods just to meet the therapist of their nightmares
    ? Estranged couple decides for a hiking therapy where a masked psychopath with a killer dog captures them. They are now forced to confront each other to survive.
    ? A hiking trip of an alienated couple turns into a fast-lane relationship therapy through a sadistic encounter with a horrific villain

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